Loli

Loli

hold me to your chest
            –          block the sounds out
cover my trembling lips
with the warm of yours
remove any doubt
               –       of safety in your arms
because I’m scared

– – and I need you.

– K

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6 thoughts on “Loli

    • Lol I was waiting to see if anyone would pick that up. I didn’t mean the state of being warm but rather the process of making something warm. Reason being it wasn’t supposed to be a quick fleeting kiss, it needed to be something more; sedating the speaker’s being through something long and magical. Thus the use of warm instead of warmth. As well as it does seem out of place, further adding to the chaotic feeling in the poem.

      Thank you for attention to detail, I do appreciate them.

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      • I believe that if I am given the opportunity to take seconds from someone – that they will never get back – it must be worthy of value of them; justify the theft.

        Thank you again, it’s just as fulfilling to know that my words are appreciated.

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